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Posted by: Don, January 20th, 2023, 4:24pm
The Muse by Steven Sallie - Short, Horror - A struggling poet sees a ghost in his home and convinces himself that she is his muse. 9 pages - pdf format
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Posted by: Pleb, January 21st, 2023, 11:27am; Reply: 1
Hey Steven,
I loved this. Thought it was great. Really nicely written and very atmospheric. I was expecting a twist at the end. Or a twist on the twist if that makes sense. Like maybe in that last moment he was to see his muse again. But maybe that would have cheapened it, I don’t know.
Excellent job though.
Cheers
Max
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