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Posted by: Don, March 26th, 2023, 10:14am
Blind Justice by Dan Abrams - Short, Comedy - A blind man offers to tell a joke in a rough biker bar, the patrons are not amused. 2 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Posted by: Matthew Taylor, March 29th, 2023, 4:01am; Reply: 1
Hi Dan

I'm sure this is an old joke, and not one you have come up with.

I also have my doubts that a filmmaker would make a movie about a sexist blonde joke. Probably a few decades late for that.

Posted by: Zack, March 29th, 2023, 9:43am; Reply: 2
Meh. I thought it was funny. Lol.

Writing could be tightened a bit, but not bad overall. Thanks for sharing.
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