100 ways to laugh by Simon Parker - Series, Comedy, Sitcom - Sam is looking to pursue a career in stand up comedy when his friend convinces him to seduce a powerful agent, but things quickly get out of hand. 25 pages - pdf format

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I like the way you built a house of cards with all jokers only to have it collapse on Sam. I loved the ending and in particular, the epilogue. My favorite line: "I think I've traumatized her enough for one evening."