Madness by Brooke Em - Short, Thriller, Erotic - Two couples struggle to get on with each other’s living standards… 48 pages - pdf format

New writer interested in feedback on this work, please be nice :)

hey Brooke,

The format is all over the place. You might have a great story, but very difficult to read. Lots of great script format material online and also on this site. As a start, clean it up, correct the format, reduce the number of pages, 48 pages too long for a short, try to stay in the 20-ish range, max.

Good luck. Join the board.

Frank