Demonic Addiction by Simon Parker - Short, Horror - A burnout cop believes his only daughter has become a heroin addict, but his wife thinks she's become possessed by the devil, and both have very different plans on how they're going to save her. 10 pages - pdf format

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HARRY, 45, messy hair, bloodshot eyes and unsaved face.??

I stopped reading there. I know it's a typo but before you upload you must check all typos, otherwise, the reader is put off of reading further.

I've done it myself, so know it's irritating.