Somebody Help Phillip! by Rob Herzog - Short, Dramedy - Rescuing a fallen old man leads Jeff on a strange journey. 10 pages

Rework of an OWC script - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

I remembered this from the OWC. I see how you reworked this. You changed some of Philip's lines as a philosophy professor and removed the reference to a supreme being taking over Goran's body to offer Jeff a reward. I realize that ending was to fulfill the OWC criteria. I like this ending better. It gave a rather humorous moral to the story. Sometimes your reward for doing good is a flip-flop you don't want to wear in the house placed next to a chore to do in the morning.