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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / Short Action / Adventure Scripts / To Gain
Posted by: Don, June 19th, 2023, 3:19pm
To Gain by Jaime Sarabia - Short, Action, Drama - Two cousins hang out before one goes away forever. 8 pages - pdf format
Writer interested in feedback on this work
Posted by: Stoneyscripts, June 29th, 2023, 7:14am; Reply: 1
Interesting little story. To Gain. Or Not To Gain, is the question.
For me personally it was a bit tricky to follow.
Too much ellipsis, italics and so on.
Keep it simple is my input, but I did enjoy the experience of reading something like this, since I liked your descriptions.
Keep going.
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