I'm posting this Logline Review for Daryl.

When it comes to writing, I consider myself a beginner. I have just started writing a speculative D&D film script called 'Balance of Power'.  I have the story and most of the important dialogue already in my head. I was searching around for some information and stumbled across this site and this post. I thought it might be fun to come up with a logline for my story, but found it almost impossible.  I'm stretching the term logline to the limit, but here goes...

The greatest evil returns, a hero back from the dead, powerful emotions unleashed, love, hate, desperation, guilt, vengeance,  kingdoms at war, epic battles, a dangerous quest and a mighty entity facing an impossible choice.

Posted by Daryl Linson

Kathy & Dave posted feedback here:

https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1567692203/s-5/highlight-/#num5

Additional feedback can be posted in this thread. :)