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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board  /  August '23 OWC  /  The August 2023 theme
Posted by: Yuvraj, August 5th, 2023, 9:00pm
AND HERE WE GO...


Theme: Fever Dream

FYI: A fever dream is a particularly distressing, scary, or bizarre dream that a person may have when experiencing a fever. (Source: https://www.dictionary.com/browse/fever-dream)

Challenge: Write a coherent story where your main character has a fever dream.  

There's more --> The dream becomes the driving force to take revenge on someone who betrayed the protagonist, but this plan backfires terribly.

Genre: Horror/suspense/thriller

Script length: Upto 10 pages.  

Locations: As many as you need. (Although, budget-wise you should aim for a singular location)

Time: 168 hours (7 days).


THE USUAL:

This isn't a contest - it's a challenge. There are no official prizes.

You can revise your script as many times as you wish up until the deadline.

Do not put your real name(s) on your script; this is an anonymous challenge. However, please use your real name(s) when submitting your script.

After the challenge closes you can either have your script removed or resubmit your script with your name on it.

(Don's rule)
Participants must read and comment/review in the discussion board at least 10 other scripts submitted or your work will be removed (no harm, no foul. I understand that life gets in the way.

Please put ©2023 on your title page.

Any questions about the challenge, post them here.

There will be a review page emailed to you for you to score the scripts you read. Please only give scores to scripts that you have read.

Please do not rate scripts in your review.
Posted by: LC, August 5th, 2023, 9:08pm; Reply: 1
I love this bit:

Write a coherent story where your main character has a fever dream.  

;D

That said, a nice challenge, Yuvraj.
Horror fans should be over the moon.
Posted by: steven8, August 5th, 2023, 9:12pm; Reply: 2

Quoted from LC

Write a coherent story...  


That leaves me out.  Maybe the next challenge.
Posted by: Yuvraj, August 5th, 2023, 9:57pm; Reply: 3

Quoted from steven8
That leaves me out.  Maybe the next challenge.


You can always try.
Posted by: AlsoBen, August 6th, 2023, 12:46am; Reply: 4
Damn, this hits all my spots -  dream scenes, psychodrama, ambiguous morality. I'll see how busy work is this week :)
Posted by: Yuvraj, August 6th, 2023, 12:58am; Reply: 5

Quoted from AlsoBen
Damn, this hits all my spots -  dream scenes, psychodrama, ambiguous morality. I'll see how busy work is this week :)


Go for it!
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, August 6th, 2023, 6:08am; Reply: 6
Nice!

Countdown please!
Posted by: Zack, August 6th, 2023, 9:32am; Reply: 7
This one seems fun! Let's see what I can come up with...
Posted by: PKCardinal, August 6th, 2023, 7:28pm; Reply: 8
...tosses out all incoherent ideas...looks at what remains...
Posted by: Yuvraj, August 6th, 2023, 7:46pm; Reply: 9

Quoted from PKCardinal
...tosses out all incoherent ideas...looks at what remains...


By just adding one word... made this more challenging. :)
Posted by: ghost and_ghostie gal, August 6th, 2023, 8:13pm; Reply: 10
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Ahoy - Yuvraj, so you're running this circus -- well some one has to be the ringleader - everyone else are clowns. ;D

Thankfully I'm still over the moon - and we've got a good idea(methinks) and I'm almost done writing it. :)_ghostie gal
Posted by: Zack, August 6th, 2023, 8:39pm; Reply: 11
Damn. Slow down, Andrea! Give the rest of us clowns a chance!
Posted by: steven8, August 6th, 2023, 8:42pm; Reply: 12

Quoted from Yuvraj


By just adding one word... made this more challenging. :)


Every script is coherent to the person who wrote it...
Posted by: kcranford, August 6th, 2023, 8:55pm; Reply: 13
Wow!  I take a one week vacation and look what happens!  Another challenge appears!  I still have beach brain so don’t know if “coherent” is in my wheelhouse right now, but according to the clock, I have 6 days, 2 hours and 9 minutes to pull a rabbit out of the hat.  Not sure I’ll have anything, but there’s always hope. Maybe it will come to me in a dream.  :)
Posted by: Yuvraj, August 6th, 2023, 9:07pm; Reply: 14

Quoted from steven8
Every script is coherent to the person who wrote it...


Just wanted to be sure.  ;)
Posted by: Yuvraj, August 6th, 2023, 9:09pm; Reply: 15

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Ahoy - Yuvraj, so you're running this circus -- well some one has to be the ringleader - everyone else are clowns. ;D

Thankfully I'm still over the moon - and we've got a good idea(methinks) and I'm almost done writing it. :)_ghostie gal


That was fast... and furious.
Posted by: ghost and_ghostie gal, August 7th, 2023, 2:29am; Reply: 16

Quoted from Zack
Damn. Slow down, Andrea! Give the rest of us clowns a chance!


It's so easy... a caveman can do it. ;D

Posted by: AlsoBen, August 7th, 2023, 4:45am; Reply: 17
I just vomited something out, but it's gonna be so guessable as mine...I'm tempted to start from scratch
Posted by: Yuvraj, August 7th, 2023, 5:46am; Reply: 18

Quoted from AlsoBen
I just vomited something out, but it's gonna be so guessable as mine...I'm tempted to start from scratch


You still have plenty of time.
Posted by: ColinS, August 7th, 2023, 11:26am; Reply: 19
Ah nuts - just noticed the genres - back to the drawing board  ::)
Posted by: PKCardinal, August 7th, 2023, 11:39am; Reply: 20

Quoted from ColinS
Ah nuts - just noticed the genres - back to the drawing board  ::)


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Me, too. I mean, I knew it when I started formulating my story. But, somewhere, as the story revealed, it...switched.

Dang it.

And, it was relatively coherent, too.
Posted by: Zack, August 7th, 2023, 12:01pm; Reply: 21
The wheels are turning...
Posted by: SAC, August 7th, 2023, 1:08pm; Reply: 22
Just saw this today. Nice one!
Posted by: ColinS, August 8th, 2023, 9:01am; Reply: 23

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!!$#%$%%#%!#%$!#

Me, too. I mean, I knew it when I started formulating my story. But, somewhere, as the story revealed, it...switched.

Dang it.

And, it was relatively coherent, too.


Haha - not sure my idea was either coherent or in anyway good, so the genre might be doing me a favour. Gotta try and get one in this time!
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, August 8th, 2023, 11:58am; Reply: 24
Sh1t there's a genre requirement!?!

You'd think after entering so many OWCs I'd remember to read ALL the requirements ;-)
Posted by: Abe from LA, August 8th, 2023, 4:31pm; Reply: 25
I came up with an idea for a story, but coherency it might not be.
On the fence for now.
Posted by: SAC, August 8th, 2023, 5:44pm; Reply: 26

Quoted from AnthonyCawood
Sh1t there's a genre requirement!?!

You'd think after entering so many OWCs I'd remember to read ALL the requirements ;-)


We seem to have moved away from the genre requirements of late, save the October OWC, which is always horror. Some of the best OWCs, personally, were the genre requirement ones. I always felt they added a spark of creativity, having to write inside of a specific box and all.
Posted by: LC, August 8th, 2023, 6:08pm; Reply: 27
Horror, Suspense, Thriller.
Just keep saying it over and over.

My favourite genres, now I come to think of it. :)
Posted by: ghost and_ghostie gal, August 9th, 2023, 6:46am; Reply: 28

Quoted from LC
Horror, Suspense, Thriller.
Just keep saying it over and over.

My favourite genres, now I come to think of it. :)


Well... did you have time to think up an entry? ;D ;D

Posted by: Grandma Bear, August 9th, 2023, 8:34am; Reply: 29
I fully intended to take part in this one, but the director making Ai Illusion asked me this morning if I could write her one more. Twenty pages this time. And, if I could have a draft ready by Sunday that would be super... Since I'm old, stupid, and a slow learner, I said yes, of course. :D
Posted by: LC, August 9th, 2023, 4:38pm; Reply: 30

Quoted from Grandma Bear
I fully intended to take part in this one, but the director making Ai Illusion asked me this morning if I could write her one more. Twenty pages this time. And, if I could have a draft ready by Sunday that would be super... Since I'm old, stupid, and a slow learner, I said yes, of course. :D

Really? What's with the deadline. And a new script entirely? I hope it pays off, Pia.

Would have loved to see what you came up with in this OWC.

Posted by: LC, August 9th, 2023, 4:42pm; Reply: 31

Well... did you have time to think up an entry? ;D ;D

I'm at this point.

Me to self: Great idea!
A day or so later...
That's a crap idea.
:D

Posted by: Grandma Bear, August 9th, 2023, 6:14pm; Reply: 32

Quoted from LC

Really? What's with the deadline. And a new script entirely? I hope it pays off, Pia.

Would have loved to see what you came up with in this OWC.

They're starting to shoot Ai Illusion next month and then they had plans to shoot Tangled Web. They did not know that that one had been sold. I'm supposed to get the money on the 15th. When that happens I will ask Don to remove it. I guess that was the reason for the hurry. Regardless, I will try to read as many as I can.  :)

Posted by: Yuvraj, August 9th, 2023, 6:25pm; Reply: 33

Quoted from Grandma Bear
They're starting to shoot Ai Illusion next month and then they had plans to shoot Tangled Web. They did not know that that one had been sold. I'm supposed to get the money on the 15th. When that happens I will ask Don to remove it. I guess that was the reason for the hurry. Regardless, I will try to read as many as I can.  :)


Fantastic opportunity, Pia! Good luck!
Posted by: PKCardinal, August 9th, 2023, 9:34pm; Reply: 34

Quoted from Grandma Bear

They're starting to shoot Ai Illusion next month and then they had plans to shoot Tangled Web. They did not know that that one had been sold.



Crushing it. As always.
Posted by: PKCardinal, August 10th, 2023, 4:42pm; Reply: 35
For the first time in a while...it looks like I'll have an entry. Just remember, the parameters are "coherent" not "quality."
Posted by: Matthew Taylor, August 11th, 2023, 5:09am; Reply: 36
Yuvraj, just wanted to pop in and say that this is a great challenge  :).

So gutted I can't make it in (just returned from holiday, got home to a hemorrhaging fish tank I need to sort AND prepping for my youngest birthday party tomorrow  :o)

Should be able to read some next week though.
Posted by: Yuvraj, August 11th, 2023, 10:17pm; Reply: 37

Quoted from Matthew Taylor
Yuvraj, just wanted to pop in and say that this is a great challenge  :).


Thanks.


Quoted from Matthew Taylor
So gutted I can't make it in (just returned from holiday, got home to a hemorrhaging fish tank I need to sort AND prepping for my youngest birthday party tomorrow  :o)


No problem.


Quoted from Matthew Taylor
Should be able to read some next week though.


That'll be great.
Posted by: Yuvraj, August 11th, 2023, 10:22pm; Reply: 38
How is it going, peeps? Easy enough?  ;D
Posted by: LC, August 12th, 2023, 1:25am; Reply: 39
Five pages down here, but not sure if I'll make it.
Starting late will do that. :)
Posted by: Yuvraj, August 12th, 2023, 1:32am; Reply: 40

Quoted from LC
Five pages down here, but not sure if I'll make it.


You will.
Posted by: D.A.Banaszak, August 12th, 2023, 11:54am; Reply: 41
At the risk of seeming incompetent, I missed the link to submit my entry.

How do I send in my work?
Posted by: steven8, August 12th, 2023, 12:01pm; Reply: 42

Quoted from D.A.Banaszak
At the risk of seeming incompetent, I missed the link to submit my entry.

How do I send in my work?


https://www.simplyscripts.com/owc
Posted by: D.A.Banaszak, August 12th, 2023, 1:48pm; Reply: 43
Thank you! You're a light saber! I mean, life saver.  Stupid autocorrect.
Posted by: khamanna, August 12th, 2023, 3:25pm; Reply: 44
Stoping by to say that it sounds like a very fun challenge. I can't participate, not even sure if I'll be able to read any. I wish everyone who enters has a good time!
Posted by: PKCardinal, August 12th, 2023, 3:43pm; Reply: 45

Quoted from D.A.Banaszak
At the risk of seeming incompetent, I missed the link to submit my entry.

How do I send in my work?


Theme of the OWC is coherence vs incoherence, not competence vs incompetence... so, you're good.
Posted by: PKCardinal, August 12th, 2023, 3:48pm; Reply: 46
I'm in.
Posted by: Zack, August 12th, 2023, 6:53pm; Reply: 47
I tried to get something together, but I failed. Too much on my plate currently. Going to make a real effort to read these. Looking forward to seeing what everyone's got up their sleeves! :)
Posted by: AlsoBen, August 12th, 2023, 9:08pm; Reply: 48
Well, I submitted...as always, I wasted most of the week and spend this morning doing the bulk of the work. Worried about the "coherent story" rule, haha.

If any of the scripts read like insane scribblings done in a few hours at most, well...you've figured out who wrote it!
Posted by: AlsoBen, August 12th, 2023, 9:38pm; Reply: 49
I don't see any scripts up LC - I only submitted like 15 mins ago
Posted by: LC, August 12th, 2023, 9:45pm; Reply: 50
It's okay, Ben. False alarm.
As you were. :)
Posted by: Yuvraj, August 12th, 2023, 11:37pm; Reply: 51
Time's up!

The scripts will be up shortly.  
Posted by: LC, August 13th, 2023, 12:06am; Reply: 52
Looking forward to it!
Posted by: steven8, August 14th, 2023, 1:50am; Reply: 53
Didn't write one this time.  I only had one idea, which I tried a few variations in my mind...and they all sucked.  Oh well, it happens.  Anyway, I read all the scripts and there were some really cool ideas.  All better than mine.
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