The Dark Gate of Depravity is a tale of two lovers. One of which has a lust for violence, while the other is drawn into the darkness and learns to enjoy it.

These first 9 pages are the opening scene, introducing the two characters. I'm interested in general feedback, and maybe some advice if I'm too wordy or not descriptive enough in some areas.

Thanks in advance.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1xF2dJp4MJSZyik8ma8Be6FPul-PG5tae/view?usp=drive_link

Oh, I liked that.  Quick, snappy and gritty, all in one.  Description was just fine and pushed things along just right, while supplying enough information that it was clear in my mind.  Beautiful scene setting and imagery.  Keep going on this.  Love the banter and can't wait to see what happens to the team next.

**Two Thumbs Up**

Appreciate it.

Moved this to the Work in Progress thread.
You might get more eyes on it here.

Oh thanks. Wasn’t aware I was in the wrong section.