Under The Blood Moon logline

Posted by: Zack, August 18th, 2023, 2:45am

An outgoing woman and her reserved fiancee stumble on a brutal ritual and must race through the forest from a blood-thirsty ancient fiend!

This is a short script based on my feature The Potem. I'll be producing this short early next summer as a proof-of-concept, then pitch the finished short film to potential investors with plans to produce the feature version the following summer. I've got a long road ahead of me, but I'm both ready and excited to face the challenge! This is what I was born to do. :) ;D

Will submit the short script soon, as well as an updated draft of the feature.

Any suggestions on the logline for this short are much appreciated!

Posted by: steven8, August 18th, 2023, 3:14am; Reply: 1

When a newly-engaged couple stumble on a terrifying blood-ritual deep in the forest, they're forced to flee for their lives from an ancient, blood-thirsty fiend!

Posted by: Zack, August 18th, 2023, 3:16am; Reply: 2

Quoted from steven8

When a newly-engaged couple stumble on a terrifying blood-ritual deep in the forest, they're forced to flee for their lives from an ancient, blood-thirty fiend!

Nice! I like it. Definitely an improvement. Thanks, Steven. :)

Posted by: steven8, August 18th, 2023, 3:22am; Reply: 3

Quoted from Zack

Nice! I liked it. Definitely an improvement. Thanks, Steven. :)

You're quite welcome.

Posted by: Matthew Taylor, August 18th, 2023, 4:36am; Reply: 4

That sounds far too scary and thrilling to be honest Zack. Maybe tone it down for the Disney crowd, here I will help...

A lovely woman and her devoted fiancee stumble on a gentle ritual and must move briskly (but safely) through the forest from a slightly miffed ancient sprite!

;D ;D

Sounds awesome Zack, looking forward to reading it!

Posted by: kcranford, August 18th, 2023, 11:11am; Reply: 5

Throwing in my two cents:

When an unsuspecting couple stumble upon a terrifying blood ritual deep in the forest, an ancient malevolent presence forces them to flee for their life.

Posted by: Zack, August 18th, 2023, 8:33pm; Reply: 6

All great suggestions! Thanks, everyone! :)

Can't wait to share the script with you. Will throw it up here just as soon as the submissions have opened back up. :)

Posted by: Zack, August 22nd, 2023, 12:59am; Reply: 7

Quoted from Matthew Taylor

A lovely woman and her devoted fiancee stumble on a gentle ritual and must move briskly (but safely) through the forest from a slightly miffed ancient sprite!

LMAO!

Somehow I missed your comment, Matt. Sorry about that! The script is up now. :)

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