Overcoming the limits of love by Lorena Venticinque - Series, Drama, Love - It's not the limits of your past that deprive you of loving. 472 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Hi Lorena, I gave this a look and my advice is this:
I suggest you post a Pilot Episode of your series, otherwise 472 pages is very daunting.

Also CAP your characters on first intro.
Is English your first language? Some of your dialogue is a bit stilted and missing prepositions.

Happy to offer more advice if you're around.
A couple of links to help below.

https://screencraft.org/blog/how-to-structure-a-great-tv-pilot/
https://www.studiobinder.com/blog/what-is-a-cold-open-in-tv/#:~:text=The%20purpose%20of%20cold%20openings&text=Quickly%20engaging%20the%20audience%20sets,things%20at%20the%20same%20time.

Far too long to read through. Break it down and pilot the first episode.

Enough said.