One man's trash by Simon Parker - Short, Drama, Comedy - A reclusive hoarder is forced to go outside in order to catch whoever's been throwing trash bag into his prized garden. 9 pages - pdf format

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I feel like I’ve been robbed of ten minutes reading this short piece of trash (excuse the pun) I mean I get what a hoarder does and how a hoarder lives. But I get the feeling this is an exercise or an experiment of some kind. The narrative goes nowhere special even tho you introduce a slight unexpected turn around. Maybe this is part of a feature.  Thanks for sharing tho.