Cleaning Ladies by James Austin Mccormick - Short, Dramedy - A crime boss calls together her old team of contract killers for one last job but finds her “cleaning ladies” less than enthusiastic, especially when they learn who the target is. 6 pages - pdf format

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Hi James. I gave this a read and felt that you didn�t supply enough fuel to the premise. I�m sure there�s more to this story than you�ve provided so I�ll leave it there for now. Thanks for sharing.