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The Quest for the Red Boat - WT2 (currently 1438 views)
Kevin_S.
Posted: June 14th, 2019, 12:35am
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Greetings,
Well rounded story for the page limit. Clear goal . Whistles always make good prop comedy like how you used it. I can’t think of the movie ,but when Billy took off tweeting , it made me laugh because I related him to that one scene I watched. Whistle isn’t worth anything if no one around to hear it lol.
Not really to much to say. You know your way around a story. Your writing is above my skill level so I can’t really give you constructive criticism.
This one is one of the best if not the best for me. Great job for the challenge. If it was a standalone I would say she tamed that rat too easy. And İ would suggest some talk about rabbies and all. But for this its great. Now I have to reread the other entry I scored highly to score you both accordingly.
Yes, there was a story and it met the criteria. Not an interesting story for me and not very funny. I was just waiting for something to happy besides finding reasons to tweeee the whistle. Characters and dialog were so-so.
What was that? Isn't it supposed to be comedy this round? It seems that you made no attempt whatsoever. It fails on criteria. It reads more like a horror.