First 10 pages-
Expert writing skills, will go through the whole thing in a couple of days.
"And thatís supposed to make humans think that the Shop ďisnítĒ ran by pedophiles" - " I LoLed so hard.
Definitely my type of humour.
Uh, no thanks. Iím not a domestic dog > I'm not that kind of a domestic dog would sound even better ...
Just a question. Why the camera angles/shots?