[quote][/quote]Hi here is my story (skeleton) about future and humanity

The vessel

The world had ended in a blaze of fire and blood, torn apart by a brutal civil war that had left nothing in its wake but destruction and despair. The survivors had fled to a massive vessel, a floating city that sailed endlessly through the empty expanse of a world without land.

On board the vessel, society had been reduced to a rigid caste system, with the rich living in the upper decks, enjoying all the luxuries that came with their status, while the poor languished in the lower decks, struggling to eke out a living in the shadow of the privileged few.

But Jacky refused to accept this bleak reality. He was a revolutionary, a man with a fierce passion for justice and a burning desire to make a difference. He knew that the key to his vision lay in the core of the vessel, the engine that powered their endless journey. And so he plotted and schemed, gathering allies and resources, waiting for the perfect moment to strike.

As he neared his goal, he met Jane, a young woman from the upper decks who had grown disillusioned with her privileged life. She saw the suffering of the lower decks and felt a burning desire to make a difference. And as they worked together, fighting side by side against the cruel injustices of their society, they fell deeply in love.

Their love was forbidden, of course, for they came from different worlds, different castes. But they refused to let society's conventions stand in their way. They knew that their love was meant to be, and they fought for it with all their hearts.

As they worked together, they faced massive obstacles and danger at every turn. The upper deckers fought fiercely to maintain their power, while the lower deckers struggled to survive. The battles were bloody and brutal, with lives lost on both sides. Jacky fought with all his might, driven by his rage and his love for Jane.

But their love was not to be.

Jacky's father, Tak, had always been a source of pride and support for him. He had stood by his son through thick and thin, always encouraging him to follow his dreams, no matter how difficult the path might be.

But when Jacky became involved in the revolution, his father turned his back on him. He saw his son as a traitor, someone who was disrupting the order and balance of their society. He couldn't understand why Jacky was willing to risk everything to fight for a better world, and he couldn't forgive him for going against the established norms and conventions.

As a staunch supporter of the existing caste system, his father  had become increasingly disillusioned with his son's involvement in the revolutionary movement. He saw it as a threat to the established order and the privileges of the upper decks. Despite Jacky's attempts to explain his motives and goals, his father refused to listen, and their relationship grew increasingly strained.

One day, as the tensions between the upper and lower decks grew, a violent skirmish broke out on the deck where Jacky's father was stationed. He was caught in the crossfire and was fatally wounded. Jacky rushed to his father's side, desperate to save him, but it was too late. His father died in his arms, his last words a plea for Jacky to abandon his revolutionary ideals and return to the status quo.

Jane's mother, on the other hand, had always been distant and unsupportive towards her daughter's passions and dreams. She was a member of the upper decks, living a life of luxury and privilege, far removed from the struggles and hardships of the lower decks. She saw Jane's involvement in the revolutionary movement as a threat to her social standing and disapproved of her daughter's relationship with Jacky.

One day, as Jane was making her way through the upper decks, she was accosted by a group of upper deckers who disapproved of her involvement with Jacky. They were angry at her for challenging the status quo and threatening their power and privilege. Jane's mother, who was with her at the time, stepped in to protect her daughter, but she was caught in the crossfire and was fatally wounded.

Jane was devastated by her mother's death, feeling guilty and sad that she had never been able to connect with her on a deeper level. She realized that her mother had loved her in her own way, but their differences had always kept them apart.

When Jane's mother died trying to protect her from those who disapproved of her relationship with Jacky, she was wracked with guilt and sadness. She had always felt a sense of isolation and loneliness within her own family, but now she realized that her mother had loved her after all, in her own way.

The loss of their parents added another layer of tragedy to Jacky and Jane's love story. They were forced to rely on each other, to support and care for one another in a world that had already shown them so much cruelty and hardship. But their love was strong, and it sustained them through the trials and tribulations that lay ahead.

As they fought together in hope to bring about a better world, they knew that they were fighting not just for themselves, but for the memory of their parents, for the hope that one day, everyone would have a chance to live in a just and equal society. They also realised that the core was essential for their victory.

The core was a mysterious and powerful object, a source of energy that had been harnessed to power the vessel for generations. It was like  containing the secrets of the universe, the knowledge of the ages, and the power to transform the world.

Jack and Jane sensed that it held some deeper meaning, some hidden truth that could change the course of their lives.But they also knew that the core was dangerous, that tampering with it could unleash a cataclysmic force that could destroy everything.

As they finally reached the core, they were faced with a fateful decision. Destroying the core would mean risking the lives of everyone on board, while leaving it intact would mean that the lower decks would continue to suffer. Jacky struggled with the weight of this decision, knowing that the fate of the vessel hung in the balance. As they struck at the core, they felt a surge of energy coursing through their bodies, a rush of power that filled them with a sense of awe and wonder. They could feel the core responding to them.


In the end, he made a choice that would change the course of history. He destroyed the core, knowing that it was the only way to bring about true change and justice for all. But the victory came at a heavy cost, for the vessel began to sink, and the fate of all those on board was uncertain.

As the lower deckers fought for survival, Jacky watched in horror as the upper decks crumbled into chaos. The battles were fierce and bloody, with lives lost on both sides. Jacky fought with all his might, determined to make a difference, to make sure that his sacrifice, and the sacrifice of so many others, would not be in vain.

As the vessel sank beneath the waves, Jane lay dying in Jacky's arms, her life slipping away as the water closed in around them. Jacky knew that his own fate was uncertain, but he could not bear the thought of losing the woman he loved.
The survivors of the lower decks clung to debris and makeshift rafts, their fate uncertain. But then something miraculous happened - land appeared on the horizon, a distant speck that gradually grew larger and more defined.

They couldn't believe their eyes, after all these years of sailing through empty seas! But as they drew closer, they realized that the land was not just any land - it was a lush, verdant paradise, teeming with life and abundance. They saw towering trees, sparkling rivers, and colorful wildlife, and they knew that they had found a new home.

As they explored the land, they discovered that the core had connected with something, revealing the land that had been hidden from them for so long. The core had been the key to unlocking the secrets of their new home, and they were filled with a sense of wonder and gratitude.

Jacky  looked out at the new world before them, their hearts filled with hope and possibility. They knew that the road ahead would not be easy, that they would face new challenges and obstacles, but they also knew that they had a chance to build a new world, a better world, where justice and equality reigned supreme.

The survivors of the lower decks held onto the hope of building a new society, one that would be founded on the principles of fairness, compassion, and respect. They had been changed by their experiences, their struggles, and their sacrifices, and they knew that they had a duty to make the world a better place.

And as they looked back at the sinking vessel, they knew that it would always be a symbol of the sacrifices they had made, the struggles they had endured, and the love that had sustained them through it all. They had been through so much, but they had emerged stronger, more resilient, and more determined than ever before.

P.S.
The revelation of the land added another layer of complexity to the story, highlighting the interconnectedness of all things and the importance of perseverance in the face of uncertainty. It showed that sometimes the answers we seek are hidden in plain sight, and that by staying true to our values and our vision, we can overcome even the greatest of obstacles.