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Rob S.
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Poems that tells some kind of story.  Any style or form.  I guess I should get the ball rolling with this not very good narrative about going to buy a pizza.  How lame a subject is that?

Seven o'clock on a Thursday night
And all of us needed food.  Friend
Turned to friend, then they all turned
To me.  "Go, get a pizza," one said.
"And buy us some beers, too.  We
Need drinks."  I was quickly out the door.

I hopped in my car and took off.
My windows down, loud music blasting
From my newly installed sound system,
And little children shielding their ears
From the rockin' guitar sounds as I
speed past them doing seventy.

Down the road is a large shopping
Center with an old Wal-Mart, a
Food Lion, and a freshly painted
Pizza Hut that seems to get robbed
Daily.  Most of the time, cash isn't
The thing that is stolen, but those
Buffet pizzas.  I guess people can't
Help themselves.  Go to Wal-Mart,
Buy a shirt and jeans, maybe a hat,
And stroll down to the Pizza Hut and
Steal a slice of deep dish pepperoni.

I pulled into the parking lot and
Found a perfect spot in the space
In front of the set of glass doors.
I cut the ignition off.  The music
Stopped playing and the ringing
In my ears began.  I stepped out
Of my car and breathed in the
Evening air.  I passed through the
doors and into the restaurant.

A nice looking young woman
Greeted me from behind the
Counter as I walked in.  She
Gave me a cute smile and asked
Me for my order.  The world stopped.
Timed ceased to exist.  What
Was happening?  I tried to talk,
But couldn't.  She asked again.
I took a deep breath and said
Something.  I don't remember
What it was.  It came out garbled.

She nodded her head and stepped
Out from behind the counter.  She
Understood.  We left together.  We
got into my car and I drove away.  I
Never did get that pizza, but I got
Something much better, a sweet
Woman who I knew was the one for me.


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Aw, Rob.  So in love are you.  I think it's cute.  This one I've got is called "Watch You Try to Love Me" about a girl who obsesses over a celebrity who will never know or care who she is after he signs his autograph for her.

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Watch me surrender myself to you.

Watch your oblivious form in front of me
fit squarely into a box on a stand
no taller than my knee.

Watch me ever so calmly
move you into my room...
Watch my heart pound
steadily doing so.

Watch the two of us involved with others.

Watch me sit quietly with him.
Watch you make love to her...
and her...and her...
and not me.

Watch my eyes burn green with envy.

Watch my fountain pen
dance across a blank page.

Watch it ecstatically scrawl
your last name next to my first
as I write you a love note
I wait for you to read.

Watch me remember when we’ll first meet.

Watch you pull me toward you
in one heavenly embrace
Watch it end too quickly.
Watch you forget my name
two minutes after you sign it
on your own 8 x 10 glossy.

Watch my sadness replace your empty footsteps.

Watch my heart physically break in two.
Watch me say I can no longer take this...
the way you make me feel
knowing already I cannot have you.

Watch my eyes try not to notice you.
Watch me file you away
under “f” for forgotten

Watch me paper over your pictures on my walls.

Watch me no longer
surrender myself to you.
Watch your fifteen minutes
elapse to fifteen seconds
Watch your failing attempts
to stop this clock.

Watch you try desperately in vain, though.

Watch you guest host “Talk Soup”
and play golf with people no one
has ever heard of.
Watch you go from trendsetter
to spectator.
Watch you think you remember me.

Watch me eclipse you -
Watch you try to love me.


true love waits... i guess.
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And while I'm on a roll, here's one called "The Customers" about a disillusioned woman involved and still deeply in love with a guy who would rather still be playing the field.

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Water.
He knows I love water.
Free flowing, shapeless, aqueous
Transmission sent
Blue, clear - quench my thirst
I have been here all night
Not gone anywhere
And where is he

Ah, yes
I see him
in the bottom
of a martini glass
Apple
He beckons for another
and one for the girl
he romances
at the bar
she smiles -
he is so funny
she thinks
i'll smile
another little while
just until he gets us
out of here.

I stare through the walls
thinking they need
a newer, more opaque color
oh shit that was weird
I just got dizzy
for a minute
Must be a bad pill

He slinks off
from the bar
two girls on his arm
not love
but not bad
they'll do for now
so I assume
Think I recognize one
oh yeah
that's me

lovely lovely
sitting by the phone
falling asleep
with the ringer on
head down
eyes closed
silent sigh

Don't wait up
he always says
it's utterly
and completely
pointless
just so I know

It's not a problem
in no way a habit
just sex
that's all

at what expense
not a habit
look at yourself
i fail to see it
that's why you look
harder

Where was I
going with this?

Oh yeah
that's right.

I wasn't.


true love waits... i guess.
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Rob S.
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You are on a roll.  Wow.  You're very talented.  You really are.  Some of the best poems I've ever read, you wrote.  I'm not lying.  Here's one about how I met my wife.

Recess at the elementary school.  I
Stood under a basketball hoop,
Watching friends play ball, waiting
For my chance to jump in and show
Them how good I am.  Out of the
Corner of my eye, I saw a girl
Sitting on a bench, by herself.
I didn't recognize her.  "Who is
She?" I thought to myself.  "Why
Is she there all by herself?  She
Should be having fun."

The ball hit me in the leg, snapping
Me back into reality.  "Wake up, man"
My friend Michael said to me.  I asked
Him if he knew that girl.  His response
Was typical of the friends I had then.
"I don't know.  I don't care.  She's not
Bothering us, so to hell with her."  Usually,
I would shrug my shoulders and forget
About it.  Hell, I was young, in the
Fourth grade and not the nicest kid
In the world.  Some would say that
I was the meanest.

As much as I wanted to forget about
This girl I saw who I didn't know, I
Simply couldn't.  Something, a feeling
I cannot describe, was pulling at me.
What was happening to me?  Who is
This person?  Why can't I turn my head?

The pull was too overwhelming.  I
Had to go up to her.  I left the court
And slowly walked towards the bench.
I saw plainly that she was not happy,
But looked like she was crying.  I
Sat down next to her.  She paid me
No attention.  "I'm Rob.  Are you okay?"
I asked her.  She composed herself
Like a pro.  "I'm all right," she responded.

I sat there for a minute or two
And nothing else was said.  Job
Done I thought.  Now, I can leave
And play some ball.  I got up from
The bench to walk away, but she
Grabbed my arm.  "Please, don't
Leave," she said with her trademark
Soft, angelic voice.  I sat back down
And we began to talk.  We talked till
It was time to go back to class.

After school, I waited for her.  This
More than anything, I cannot explain.
When she walked out of her class,
She saw me and smiled.  I walked
Her home.  Coincidently, she lived
Very close to my house.  We talked
Some more and got to know each
other a little.  Quickly, we became
The best of friends, life long friends.

As the years go by, there we are.
Friends came and friends left, but
We were always with each other.
We endured hardships together
And the loss of loved ones.  She
Changed me.  Once I was the
Mean kid who didn't care.  Now,
I'm the one people go to for
Support and kind words.  I
Became the friend people could
Count on when they needed
Anything.  I learned to care.

The one constant is our
Relationship, ever strong
And ever loving.  Our
meeting was not by
Chance.  I don't believe
In chance.  It was fate.


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Hey, thanks for the compliments.  I agree you are one of the nicest guys I've had the pleasure of meeting.  Wow, that one was really like a short story.  I wonder if I could condense a short story I wrote into a poem?  Well, I like this topic, so here goes:  

"I Lost You Somewhere"

You’re not so great...

You wake up five minutes
before you fall back asleep
which is when I loathe you
the most:  drowned in the light
of a flashing TV screen,
hidden in darkness.  
You always feel sick.

You’re a pathetic remnant
of your former self.  
You think no one remembers,
but I remember.
You were beautiful once.
I remember.  You had these
beautiful bright smiling eyes.
Eyes full of life.  
Intriguing eyes, equally both of
mischief and wonder;  eyes that
caused me many a meltdown.  

Oh, I wish you could know.  

I used to hear my breath catch,
right before my heart took over
and started beating its way
through my chest.  
And back then you
used to shave, because I hated
your beard

and especially how messy it
would get after a few days...
I would say it didn’t look good.
And even you would look at yourself
and smile ruefully, agreeing.
You hated how the blade scraped
away your skin, because there were
cuts you would sometimes get
(in all your haste to get it over with),
but you would do it for me.  

Or you would let me do it for you.
I was gentle.  
I never cut you.  
Do you remember?

All for smooth skin, which you know
I loved the feel of.  When you rinsed
away the cream and toweled off,
my lips would begin at your neck,
slowly grazing your cheeks and ears,
stopping only when my mouth
crushed yours and our tongues
intertwined for what seemed like an eternity
at that particular moment.  

Every occasion would have
the same effect on me.
Pure soft and smooth skin.
Smooth like your beautiful
hairless chest.
You told me when you were younger
you wanted hair to grow there,
so you could say you were finally
a man like some of your friends,
but it never did.  

And maybe at the time
this bothered you, but I was smiling
when you told me.
I was glad.  
I don’t like you with hair.  
Unless it’s on your head
but right about now
you could use a haircut.  
I’d love to see you in more than just
a dirty t-shirt and crusty old underwear.

Damn.  
What’s the same?  
I’m looking hard at you.
I’m still trying to figure
that one out.
Why is it you never move?
I know you say you
don’t have the energy,
but then you never
have the energy.

Come on, I say
rather listlessly.  
Let’s leave this place.
It rains too much here.
And you look at me.  
You don’t say anything though.
Not even a “Go on ahead”
or “I’ll catch up with you”.

It’s useless, really.
And I’m tired.
So I guess you can catch up.

I’m closing the door...
I’m going out and I don’t
expect you to stop me.  

Outside I stare up into the sky:
gray and heavy with seemingly
endless buckets of water.  
I can’t look up without flinching.
It looks as though I’m crying.
But I’m not.  
I don’t cry.  

It just kind of feels like someone
shaved a bald spot in the back
of my head.
There’s not very much
I can do about it.  

Maybe put a hat on my head.  
Hope it will go away really soon.

But that’s about it.


true love waits... i guess.
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Rob, your dormant short story gene is becoming active again.  You need to watch that.  

The talent here is so fantastic.  A lot of great poetry written by very talented people.  Congratulations to all.


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Shel Silverstein was the best at these. Especially his raunchier adult poems...Check out the devil and Billy Markem. An entire rhyming one act play. AWESOME!

http://www.banned-width.com/shel/works/markham.html


Too long to post here, but here is an excerpt.
 

The Devil walked into Linebaugh's on a rainy Nashville night
While the lost souls sat and sipped their soup in the sickly yellow neon light.
And the Devil, he looked around the room, then got down on his knees.
He says, "Is there one among you scum who'll roll the dice with me?"
Red, he just strums his guitar, pretending not to hear.
And Eddie, he just looks away and takes another sip of beer.
Vince, he says, "Not me, I'll pass, I've had my share of Hell,"
And kept scribbling on a napkin, some song he was sure would sell.
Ronnie just kept whisperin' low to the snuff queen who clutched at his sleeve,
And somebody coughed -- and the Devil scoffed -- and turned on his heel to leave.
"Hold on," says a voice from the back of the room. "'fore you walk out that door.
If you're lookin' for some action, friend, well, I've rolled some dice before."

And there stood Billy Markham, he'd been on the scene for years,
Singin' all them raunchy songs that the town didn't want to hear.
He'd been cut and bled a thousand times, and his eyes were wise and sad,
And all his songs were the songs of the street, and all his luck was bad.
"I know you," says Billy Markham, "from many a dark and funky place,
But you always spoke in a different voice and wore a different face.
While me, I've gambled here on Music Row with hustlers and with whores,
And, Hell, I ain't afraid to roll them devilish dice of yours."

"Well, then, get down," says the Devil, "just as if you was gonna pray,
And take these dice in your luckless hand and I'll tell you how this game is played.
You get one roll -- and you bet your soul -- and if you roll thirteen you win,
And all the joys of flesh and gold are yours to touch and spend.
But if that thirteen don't come up, then kiss your ass goodbye
And will your useless bones to God, 'cause your goddamn soul is mine!"

"Thirteen?" says Billy Markham. "Hell, I've played in tougher games.
I've loved ambitious women and I've rode on wheelless trains.
So gimme room, you stinkin' fiend, and let it all unwind.
Nobody's ever rolled a thirteen yet, but this just might be the time."

Then Billy Markham, he takes the dice, and the dice feel as heavy as stones.
"They should, they should," the Devil says, "'cause they're carved from Jesus' bones."
And Billy Markham turns the dice and the dice, they have no spots.
"I'm sorry," says the Devil, "but they're the only dice I got."

"Well, shit," says Billy Markham. "Now, I really don't mean to bitch,
But I never thought I'd stake my roll in a sucker's game like this."

"Well, then, walk off," says the Devil. "Nobody's tied you down."

"Walk off where?" says Billy Markham. "It's the only game in town.
But I just wanna say 'fore I make my play, that if I should chance to lose,
I will this guitar to some would-be star who'll play some honest blues,
Who ain't afraid to sing the words like damn or shit or fuck
And who ain't afraid to put his ass on the stage where he makes his bucks.
But if he plays this guitar safe, and sings some sugary lies,
I'll haunt him till we meet in Hell -- now, gimme them fuckin' dice."

And Billy Markham shakes the dice and yells, "Come on, thirteen!"
And the dice, they roll -- and they come up blank. "You lose!" the Devil screams.

"But I really must say 'fore we go our way that I really do like your style.
Of all the fools I've played and beat, you're the first one who lost with a smile."

"Well, I'll tell you somethin'," Billy Markham says. "Those odds weren't too damn bad.
In fourteen years on Music Row, that's the best damn chance I've had."

Then, arm in arm, Billy Markham and the Devil walk out through Linebaugh's door,
Leavin' Billy's old beat-up guitar there on the floor.
And if you go into Linebaugh's now, you can see it there today
Hangin' from a nail on the wall of peelin' gray
Billy Markham's old guitar . . .
That nobody dares to play.
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Well that was quite interesting...never read poems like that.  
I think I'll lay off writing one of these until I get the hang of it....

I'd hate to compete against traditionne and lesley....ha ha


He wanted to talk.  I wanted to shoot.
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This one's a little risque, but can't say I didn't warn you.  No title.  Also, I liked Marla's reprint of the poem above.  that's cool....

[i'm sorry, but this one is forever deleted - posted only here with no copies saved, a shame because i did like it the couple of times i read it over - i just had second thoughts about posting it and whenever that happens, i know it was a bad idea on my part.  

so yeah.  forever deleted.]


true love waits... i guess.
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nice


He wanted to talk.  I wanted to shoot.
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shaman, just do something free flowing.  let it come out of you.  don't worry about convention... something that moves you, go with it.


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Andrea, my short story gene is forever dormant.  I don't see me writing another one ever.


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I got a couple. I'll go from one extreme to the other here, I'm a little twisted like that.

SANATARIUM

Time is absorbed through the shadows
of another night's sleepless sleep.
As her demons calculate news ways of torture,
lying on her bed of thorns, she weeps.

Her mind is twisted and shackled,
souls of the damned laugh in her face.
Their voices call out to taunt her,
"There's no God or Holy place".

The first light of day is dawning.
Darkened eyes stare down the sanaitarium wall.
Days, months, years have passed,
no mortal pays her a call.

Alas, a woman dancing in a field of dasies.
Arms bound to her belly, she begins to sway,
then the Devil, himself, swallows her whole,
and belches out his words of distaste,
"There's no God or Holy place!"  

FAIRYLAND JUBILEE
for my grandchildren

Sprinklings from twinkling stars awaken her.
Under moonlight, glistening unicorns at play.
The little one stretches her wings.
Nighttime is the beginning of her day.

The magical night is calling her,
for what fun, without her could there be?
Tonight fireflies light the way
to the Fairyland Jubilee.

From pillows of clover she springs,
like a dainty doll on display,
joining other fairies - fluttering wings,
spreading happy dust before light of day.

Toads on toadstools commence to leaping.
A rainbow tickles a tune across the brook.
The wind nudges the willow, still sleeping.
Hungry picnic ants, anxiously begin to cook.

Dancing, then gracefully floating,
fluttering, then whimsically soaring
until night's beam graciously greets morning's ray;
creating a happy time in a most wonderful place.


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I absolutely love the contrast.  It's cool you posted them together like that.  I think it makes them better, to read one then the other.

They're great, Cindy.


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