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Don
Posted: February 17th, 2004, 10:31am
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When the World Ends by Matt C - Short, Thriller - St. Michael's State Hospital is pourly understaffed and underfunded. Then one day something really weird happens, a man shows up with a tarantuala living inside his stomach. This is the first script I ever wrote and I wrote it back in 2000. If it's a little shabby or there are facts wrong email me and let me know because I hate doing any research - html** format.
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Old Time Wesley
Posted: February 17th, 2004, 11:25pm
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First things first, that huge dialogue bit has to go. I mean security guards don't talk that much let alone a character that appears in 1 scene Nobody really has a description in here Dr Connors turns back from what he does doing. What's up with the above line? It is a good idea though, it just seems to me incomplete; almost like it could've and wanted to be a full length feature
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Old Time Wesley
Posted: February 17th, 2004, 11:26pm
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And how does this signify the end of the world, maybe the end of humanity but not the world
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chism
Posted: February 18th, 2004, 3:06am
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This script was intended to be much longer than it was and there were three parts planned, but it gave off too much of a terminator or matrix vibe so i cut it. When the world ends is called that because that was my favourite song when I finished the shorter version you read. Originally it was going to be called st michaels but i though that was pretty gay.
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Old Time Wesley
Posted: February 18th, 2004, 6:18pm
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They were spiders right? How about Humanity Bites
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Heretic
Posted: February 22nd, 2004, 2:50am
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Well, the security dude's mad long speech was kinda odd, given his absolute disappearance after. I think it needs a bit more buildup. But I liked the idea. -Chris
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