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Bizarre Bazaar - Filmed (currently 4259 views)
stevie
Posted: July 6th, 2009, 10:53pm
Of The Ancients
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Hey Mike, nice little read. It looks like you had the flash of inspo and just ran with it. That's the way comedy or satire or parody or whatever should be done. IMHO anyway. Um, as to filming it? Maybe as a animation of sorts? Do it like one of those corporate training vids or something. Cheers man.
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Shelton
Posted: July 7th, 2009, 1:43pm
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Hey guys, Thanks for reading. As far as the filming aspect, it would be damn near impossible to do it the way it's presented now, but I've got some ideas about how to rectify that once I get around to working on stuff again (when it gets colder). Thanks again, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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steven8
Posted: July 7th, 2009, 11:42pm
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I'm still reading, but I had to post this. I found the lead actor (SEB):
Nigel Davenport:
OK, I just finished reading and I must say. . .I'm exhausted! I feel like I've run a mini marathon. It was like running a verbal gauntlet. Funny in spots, but overwhelming in others, as stream of consciousness can be.
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Don
Posted: April 21st, 2022, 4:09pm
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So, what are you writing?
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Grandma Bear
Posted: April 23rd, 2022, 7:30am
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Wow! Looks like I read this 14 years ago!!!!!!!!
Just watched it and I think it's brilliant! The SS forum might have changed some. Matured a bit, I guess, but the same writing issues still remain. Captain Format is still alive and well, just not as loud.
The editing was really great. The V.O carries the film, but the stock videos work really well and keeps the budget ultra low. Brilliant!
Congrats, and hope you stick around. We could use a funny guy around here.
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