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Shelton
Posted: December 17th, 2008, 2:45pm
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Hey guys,
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dogglebe
Posted: December 17th, 2008, 2:50pm
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The emergence of "1 Guy, 1 Jar" makes it quite simple. My only fear is that people would not have heard of it, be forced to look it up, and ultimately blame me for subjecting them to it...haha. It's quite horrible.
I'd seen this little ditty about two weeks ago. WTF is wrong with people.
Try incorporating it into the ending. Maybe Dad did it....
Phil
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Toby_E
Posted: December 17th, 2008, 2:59pm
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I haven't seen the vid, and after my stomach's reaction to 2g1c, I don't plan to. But I like Phil's idea of maybe having the Dad as the 'author' of such video. Would work very nicely.
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Grandma Bear
Posted: December 17th, 2008, 3:02pm
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What's even worse is that I've seen both!! That is sooo wrong. All thanks to the wonderful people here at SS.
The 1g/1j didn't bother me as much though...
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Shelton
Posted: December 17th, 2008, 3:10pm
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Adding it in? Like, have dad with a bloody bandage attached to his ass?
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Toby_E
Posted: December 17th, 2008, 3:20pm
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Ahhh damn. I just watched that video. Shelton I officially hate you!!
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dogglebe
Posted: December 17th, 2008, 3:25pm
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Shelton
Posted: December 17th, 2008, 3:29pm
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Sorry, Toby.
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It's your payoff!
Ass bandage or 1g/1j switcheroo?
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dogglebe
Posted: December 17th, 2008, 3:36pm
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Daddy asks him if he saw 1g/1j. When the son says yes, Dad drops his pants. Son has a look of horror and
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Shelton
Posted: December 17th, 2008, 3:38pm
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Quoted from dogglebe
Daddy asks him if he saw 1g/1j. When the son says yes, Dad drops his pants. Son has a look of horror and
Honestly, I don't like it.
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jayrex
Posted: December 17th, 2008, 3:39pm
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I've never heard of this video and now I've had to see it.
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dogglebe
Posted: December 17th, 2008, 3:42pm
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Honestly, I don't like it. But I think you're the best writer here.
What don't you like about it?
And thank you.
Phil
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JonnyBoy
Posted: December 17th, 2008, 3:49pm
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Isn't this basically just the script for a 2g/1c reaction video? There are TONS of those on Youtube. My fave probably Stewie's...
http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=glOP5EtL3AI So yeah, I think you need a twisty ending to raise it about just being a glorified reaction vid. For instance, Stewie instantly wants to search for 2 guys/1c. I really like the idea of the Dad getting one over Sean somehow. That'd learn him.
Still, like all reaction videos, it was pretty funny!
Guess who's back? Back again?
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Shelton
Posted: December 17th, 2008, 4:18pm
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It's the equivalent of that joke you posted last night. Random shock, but not really in tune with my sense of humor.
JonnyBoy,
It is something like a reaction video, just a little more played otu version with the setup and what not.
I'll most likely edit it into the parameters discussed before, except without Phil's suggestion having another man drop his pants. Cause that's just weird.
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dogglebe
Posted: December 17th, 2008, 6:41pm
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