Hi, just read your short.

I imagine that the original should be beautiful if it inspired you to go for a short. I also think that the idea could be turned into a feature.

The VO in the middle - why don't you have it throughout - that came a  little out of blue for me. Otherwise it's just the middle of it from her POV. Especially at the beginning - to show why she falls in love with him - she's so bored and he's a relieve in a way; and when she's concerned about the South Pole trip - maybe she could let us know why she suggested that in the first place. Why she suggested it and became so concerned in the end?

I also want to see some motivation from the Iceman to freeze her - does he want a normal "Icewoman" or that's what he does - marries and then freezes them all to death...

I liked it overall. It's engaging and I kept reading - for a thirteen pager that's important.