The human eyes were the final ingredient he needed, no?

IMO, we don't know whether he's merely a regular old human, but based on what he accomplishes, I think it's pretty clear he's far from human.

It is a bit disappointing that the writer hasn't even chimed in once on his script, so this will be the last read of his work by me, whether I love it or not.  NO excuse for that, IMO.

I agree with Jeff that the protag is obviously more than human. Hard to say what, since all the usual monsters appeared elsewhere in the story, and he easily defeated them. He had a hanging nail or something I think, implying decayed flesh. My best guess is that he and his love have some disease which is killing them, but also gives them the vigor to fight all monster archetypes. Except Frankenstein. I don't remember him. I blame MP for his absence. With the 5 page limitation, he didn't make the cut.

It is good work, hope the writer checks in some time.

Thanks for the feedback guys!

I'm glad most o you enjoyed it.

Dreamscale, you really made my day -- but the expectation skyrocketed and you set me up for disaster, haha. Just kidding.

@SicColl, really dude? Did you HAVE to put my picture up? Now I have to go and delete it... Don't... look... at... me....

Somebody said it above but Javar IS fueled off of love. He is weak during his downtime, but when he has to get things done, he does it. Everyone has that side to them.

@ Nawasm - You're talking about Good Ole' Times. A guy said he's going to produce  that too, but he has to finish up one of his features.

Thanks guys for taking the time to read it.

Great to see you on the boards - picture's now gone!