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Darkness of Heaven by Earl J. Mullen - Thriller - Darkness of Heaven is a supernatural thriller, about a man name Verchi’el who seeks vengeance for the murder of his wife and unborn child, as he discovers who he is by the Angel Uri’el, he embraces his calling as a Demon Slayer, as time passes he meets with Isis an Oracle who puts herself in danger to get Verchi’el’s aid to battle with Kasadya a Succubus who murdered her only child. 92 pages - pdf, format
Sounds interesting, based on the synapses. I've gotten through the first 5 pages. Already I've come across a ton of grammatical errors. You should def proofread this and re-post it. I'll continue the read and hit you up with a summary.
p.s: Thanks for the read.
"After Dark" "Lie Behind the Eye" "In Came You" "Insatiable" "Bethany" "The Heartbreaker"
I'm sorry, Earl, I just couldn't make it through your script. There were way too many grammatical errors and misplaced words like "order" instead of "older" and "where" instead of "we're". I think it'd be best to have someone you trust proofread your script for you and highlight and/or go through and fix the mistakes his or herself.
You do have an interesting story but when you average 15 - 20 errors per page on your script it becomes cumbersome to read. Keep on writing.
thanks for the read, ~Brandon~
"After Dark" "Lie Behind the Eye" "In Came You" "Insatiable" "Bethany" "The Heartbreaker"
Hey Earl, I agree with Coleman about the gramatical errors, there were a lot of them and it was annoying. However, I soldiered on and read the whole thing. Overall I lked it. It was epic and imaganinative, although sometimes Verchiels dialogue with women in particular left a lot to be desired. It started off well, but the end left a lot to be desired. I think Zaphulas and Ashrael were the best best bad guys. They each had personality and I think if you would of left either of them as the last bad guy then it would of made for a better ending. Overall though good job, It was a good read and keep it up. Check out my script if you get a chance. http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/dontleavemealone.doc