Your sluglines are all over the place and incorrect.
Your formatting seems off.
You have large action blocks that need to be broken up.
You need to limit your parenthetical use.
Watch your spelling, grammar, typos.
Get rid of the continued at the bottom of the pages.
Read some professional screenplays and study the structure of them. Get a free version of screenwriting software (WriterDuet, Celtx) if you do not already have one and rewrite the script from what you have learned. You will learn a lot just from reading.
Remember you will get better with each screenplay you write.
However, one must crawl before they walk.
Keep working hard at it. You got this.
I have absolutely no idea what the note was at the end of your screenplay. If it is indeed a note it shouldn't come after The End.
All the best,