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DustinBowcot
Posted: March 20th, 2018, 3:59am Report to Moderator
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GROUND CONTROL
Commander Wankjerker. Nice to hear
from you. You're heading toward
Afghan mountainside. Be careful to
not enter Pakistani airspace, copy
that.



(VO).


Ground Control has not been introduced. You should put VO after every bit of dialogue. People producing the script will appreciate you crossing all the Ts.

Right, no time for anything else but a score.

I was bored completely by the end. The dialogue is reaching for funny and not finding it.

Writing: 2
Story: 1

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Posted: March 20th, 2018, 8:00pm Report to Moderator
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There`s too much blood in my alcohol

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Way over the top craziness that just kept going until the let's end this with egg bombings!!

That's just how I like it.. No fucks given when it comes to comedy. It's always a hit or miss genre.

Good job


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