RE2: Resident Evil 2 by Junito - Short, Action, Horror, Adaptation, Sci Fi, Fan Fiction - The muta-genetic toxin has spread throughout Raccoon City, turning the residents into zombies. Leon S. Kennedy , Claire Redfield and a few other survivors must try and escape the rapidly 'City of the dead' before they become amongs the undead. - rtf, format

I'm at school right now so I have to do this quick...

First of all,  I think the dialogue wasn't really that well written. I mean somebody dies and they're like "Oh great we lost a person. Now we have to do this." That goes along with character development, but for Leon, and I suppose you are going with how his character is in RE4, you got him right. He's quiet, sharp, and has a monotone voice that seems like he isn't afraid. But the rest of the people...the dialogue is just terrible and there is barely any character development (or that is what I think).

So this is like a short of Resident Evil Apocalypse, right? It sounds like it. Except that somebody is looking for their brother and there is a new virus...the G-Virus.

I don't really have any time to give you all my opinions, but I'm sure somebody else who reads this might.

However, I do enjoy zombie movies, so I like part of it. Good luck with future scripts.

Sean

It's was ok, I won't lie to you and say you did an perfect job.  No one can do it perfect!

Your Dialog did seem a bit...unreal.



"STOP!!" L.  "Hurry get in." C.

Kinda, lame.  No offence PLZ!  I have enough people who hate me.  I don't do much better, but I'm here to only help you improve.  
Other than that, it is a nice little read.