The Bus Ride Home by Steve Meredith - Short, Thriller - Allie Hummings has just finished a two year rehab course at a local hospital.  She catches a Greyhound bus homeward bound for Wisconsin.  She meets Mark and Sam on the bus.  But when mysterious things happen to both Mark and Sam, Allie is left alone with a mysterious driver named Ben, who takes her much farther than she ever could have imagined. 15 pages - doc, format

Hi Steve, here is two things about you short script: 1- Nice story and 2- bad formated.

Go back rewrite it without camera direction and post it back in SS. If you haven't any format program ask everyone to send you a tip saying where you can find a free one.

good luck

Hi Steven,

I live in Australia, Gold Coast, and I really liked your script! I thought the ending could've been a bit better....(I was expecting something more), but it kept me on my seat the whole time, good job!

For one of my subjects at University, I have to pick a script and discuss it - would you mind if i picked yours? I really enjoyed it - clever idea!

If that is okay, could you possibly write to me at
ozzykezza_01@hotmail.com
I need to give an outline of the idea
A synopsis
A extended background
Why the short film would be good to make, etc

Any ideas would be great!

Thanks buddy!

Kerry