Aloha by Michael - Comedy - In the raunchy tradition of Animal House and Porkys comes a comedy that has literally gone to the dogs.When Jack Fogelberg first started work at the Aloha Pet Hospital, he had no idea what was in store for him. A giant macaw, a german shepard that likes people (and cats) a little to much, and many more hilarious antics and situations. For Jack Fogelberg, everything goes wrong, and his story will have you howling with laughter.Loosley based on my experiences working at a pet hospital. - doc, format

My second script, please be warned it does contain coarse language and sexual themes. I am working on a secquel script,Kulanui , which means college in Hawaiian. If this screenplay seems childish and harsh to you...good, its meant to be loaded with screwball antics and teenage humor.

Being a young person, this is my kind of movie. The only thing that really bugged me was the formatting. Everything was WAAYY too spaced apart. Pretty good for just your second screenplay. Is there a reason your screenplays have a Haiwaiian theme to them?

Alanah~

Sorry for the spacing, this can be fixed easily. The hawaiian theme is because of the real life pet hospital which I work at, Aloha Pet Hospital. So I figured I'd take the theme and exagerate. The sequel to this screen play will follow Jack through Vet School. I'm considering a third and final screenplay, Ohana, which means family. In the third screenplay Jack would have a family, and his own veterinary practice.

I like that idea. It's very creative! Kepp up the good work.

Alanah~

You had me laughing within the first few lines "Dont touch my pussy" that was a classic, I always feel that dog humping scenes are way overkill by this point, but you seemed to give it a "something about Mary" twist to it, kinda cool. Other than that not bad.

I really enjoyed this script. I'm a big fan of "everything-goes-wrong" type things. One of my favourite films is Meet The Parents. I'm looking forward to the sequel, and teh third. Keep up the good work.

your script sooo cool the u made the comedy parts and the type of animal behaviours
even the normal relaxeing bits were so good in a way make a number2   please
well see ya