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Posted: January 23rd, 2009, 7:18pm Report to Moderator
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Pia's masterpiece is up on atom films:

http://www.atom.com/funny_videos/3EFBFFFF01A4F62F001700A6C8A9/

Give it the thumbs up.

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Rick, you need to fix the volume on this.  If I didn't read the script, I'd have no idea what was going on.

Nicely shot, though.


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I feel sick... Well done Pia... I suppose! I was gonna grab some food just now, but noooo, Pia had to ruin it for me by her disgusting little movie! I'm not hungry anymore.


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That's an excellent short.

As well as the short, the credits was a nice touch.

Great work Richard, and it's a great script Pia.


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Volumes fine on mine.
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I heard the commercial, before it, just fine.  Then the volume drops.


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That's because they deliberately play commercials too loud. You'll notice it on TV as well.

It's an old trick to get you to pay attention.

The film is set to 0db, which is standard. Something I'll bear in mind in future though.
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Sound seemed okay to me.

Nice job all around.


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Pia, that was disgusting! You should be ashamed of yourself.

I laughed my boy boobs off. Very good, don't remember ever seeing this script.

Well done.
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Oh I guess I missed this thread!!
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Big congrats, Pia! This was fabulous, not to mention grosser than I expected. The sound effects and real maggots really made this one. The acting and credit sequence were on the money as well. I'm really glad someone with actual production value decided to do this. I'd actually considered filming this instead of CC but due to the lack of a suitable "hospital" set, let alone a friend who'd want to be seen as "that girl," I opted to go with the latter.


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Who wouldn't want to play "that girl"??

I would have done it in a heartbeat if the character was supposed to be old.... actually that might have added too the grossness.  

Anyway, I think this looked really sharp!!

Can't wait to see Dog Run. That should be really good!

Great job Rick!!
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Nicely done you two.  I thought it worked especially well in a British setting, somehow the Brits can really pull something like this off.  


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Quoted from me
Can't wait to see Dog Run. That should be really good!


I think Rick is still working on getting the sound up to Phil's specifications.


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Sound is fine here, too.
Great job!

It's always such a treat to see simplyscripters scripts on film.

Cindy


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