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The Money Maker by Xavier Gonzalez - Short - A man named Money Maker holds up a bank with five other men, but will a simple "walk in and take the money" turn into something much worse?.. 17 pages. - doc, format
This was just a script I started writing that was supposed to be a feature, and this was only supposed to be an opening sequences, but it ran a little long so I just finished writing it as a short... hope those of you who read this enjoy.
Those who believe that they are the best, the most popular, the go to guy, those are usually the ones who need the most help.
I thought this read very well. The pacing worked perfectly, and the characters were just what they needed to be. A group of ruthless c*nts!
Now, one thing I felt was incongruous. I don't think Money Maker, after having heard him talk the way he did, would say "You may leave!!!", even when faking it for effect. I think he'd say something much 'rougher'.
A very good script and I think it evokes the feelings and reactions you want!
Thanks Steven, it was wasn't really a big script, i was just making up as I went along, the Money Maker is an odd guy, much like the Joker in The Dark Knight, no one know what his meanings of doing anything is, he's just a man without a plan.
Thanks for the read.
Those who believe that they are the best, the most popular, the go to guy, those are usually the ones who need the most help.