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Posted: October 22nd, 2009, 6:52pm Report to Moderator
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Supernatural: The Book of The Dead by David A. Hodge - Short, Horror - Sam and Dean team up with Sam Rami's Ash from the Evil Dead Series to kill a horde of zombies in the town of Deerbourne. - pdf, format


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Hodge...

You got alot of problems here.  Celtix, free download converts your scripts to PDF.

You have 8 and 10 lines of paragrahs.  I suggest you cut them.

"She knocked it out of his hand as her speed over-powered the assailant."  Not good.  Scripts are written in present tense.  You also have alot of this going on.

Your formatting looks way off.

"Indiana Jones would take this opportunity to slug it out with the villian, why not Dean?" Things like this only clutters your script... nothing but flowery scented-stuff.

Hope this helps

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