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leitskev
Posted: April 14th, 2011, 8:31pm Report to Moderator
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I have a series of slugs that will be viewed just through grainy surveillance video.

EXT. OUTSIDE APARTMENT


INT. LIVING ROOM


INT. BEDROOM


INT. BEDROOM


The first 3 slugs are just to be grainy black and white. The 4th is to be just a regular scene, but switching directly from the surveillance of 3. I'm not even sure if I need a separate slug for that.

Help if anyone can!
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dogglebe
Posted: April 14th, 2011, 9:38pm Report to Moderator
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I would try:

EXT. OUTSIDE APARTMENT - SECURITY CAMERA POV

Grainy black and white footage of the building corridor.  The door to APARTMENT 32B is centered in the high-angled frame.


INT. LIVING ROOM - SECURITY CAMERA POV

Similar style footage of an immaculately kept living.


INT. BEDROOM - SECURITY CAMERA POV

Footage of the room.  Nothing seems out of the ordinary.


INT. BEDROOM

The security camera is visible in the corner of the room.




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leitskev
Posted: April 14th, 2011, 9:43pm Report to Moderator
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That's good, will use, except the last, because the camera is invisible.
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dogglebe
Posted: April 14th, 2011, 10:00pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from leitskev
That's good, will use, except the last, because the camera is invisible.


No, it's not!


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leitskev
Posted: April 14th, 2011, 10:05pm Report to Moderator
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The idea is that someone is secretly stalking someone. They've put cameras near the house, in the living room, in the bed room. I want to show this without showing the stalker or the monitor. Then, on the last scene, the stalker calls the victim, and the shot switches to regular. U see what I'm saying?
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dogglebe
Posted: April 14th, 2011, 10:08pm Report to Moderator
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I see the camera!  It's on top of the bookshelf, hidden in a book.


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leitskev
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dogglebe
Posted: April 14th, 2011, 10:13pm Report to Moderator
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It's an extremely small camera because the book is tiny.  Its title is Red Sox Series Wins.

More of a pamphlet, really.  A small small pamphlet.

Oh snap!


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leitskev
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Black over white

SUPER: the first team in all of professional sports to come back from being doen 3 - 0 and the Boston Red Sox are American League Champs!

FADE OUT: NEW YORK YANKEES

Anyway, with this scene, I made 3 and 4 one slug, and wrote we switch to regular shot. Couldn't figure out what else to do. Separate slugs seems wrong now that I think about it.
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