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Don
Posted: July 14th, 2016, 6:14pm
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Boots On The Ground by Stuart Palace - Short - A couple of kicks end in a million deaths. - pdf, format
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Warren
Posted: July 14th, 2016, 7:36pm
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I liked the symbolism of this. It feels even more relevant on a day like today. Not sure what an Arab’s shins and feet look like? Don’t think it would be visually entertaining, but I liked it for what it was.
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StuartP
Posted: July 30th, 2016, 1:28am
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Thank you for your thoughts, Warren. Appreciated.
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AnthonyCawood
Posted: July 30th, 2016, 1:36pm
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Stuart As per Warren's comments, I liked the symbolism on this BUT not sure as written that it would be clear what race the children would be. Maybe it need something to set it up a little. Anthony
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DustinBowcot
Posted: July 30th, 2016, 2:38pm
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Not sure what an Arab’s shins and feet look like?
Brown and hairy if the Arabs at my school were anything to go by.
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eldave1
Posted: July 30th, 2016, 4:45pm
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Poignant - you got a ton out of a single page. Love the title - the logline needs a little work. Enjoyed this
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Reef Dreamer
Posted: July 30th, 2016, 5:53pm
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More of a message than a story, but it has something, and delivers it in one page. Kind of like that, in a sad way. Well done
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Wes
Posted: July 31st, 2016, 1:24pm
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I get the message. It over-simplifies things for me a bit too much but over all, it works.
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