The title is cool.
Here are the lines I like best: "Like I don't have a stick" and "Come look, I just crushed something."
I had a little trouble following the action on page 9 when the kid threatens to "throw" the creature in the water. It seems like he is really trying to fling or slingshot it into the water using the stick.
I like this. Budget might be high to make this one. |