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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / Comedy Scripts / Turbo Falcon Laser
Posted by: Don, March 26th, 2011, 5:33pm
Turbo Falcon Laser by Keenan Martens (kmart), Joel Laflamme, Nathan Hart - Comedy - 3 Guys try and break into the filmmaking industry by making their own movies. Think Flight of the Concords only with movies. Each episode contains a faux trailer for whatever movie that episode is based around. - html, format 8)
Posted by: Ryan1, March 26th, 2011, 6:05pm; Reply: 1
Turbo Falcon Laser. Let me just say, that's an awesome title. But, I opened up the script and the title is "Hacks."
I just scrolled the first few pages, but it was riddled with strange typos. Made reading this too hard. Take a look, you'll see.
Posted by: Electric Dreamer, March 26th, 2011, 7:08pm; Reply: 2
Turbo Falcon Laser. Let me just say, that's an awesome title. But, I opened up the script and the title is "Hacks."
I just scrolled the first few pages, but it was riddled with strange typos. Made reading this too hard. Take a look, you'll see. |
Is that kinda like getting rickrolled by a script? :P
E.D.
Posted by: svsg1982, April 4th, 2011, 6:31am; Reply: 3
This had some funny parts to it. The mac-10 is shakespear shit line. The trailers (a bit long) but funny. The squib joke and the braveheart vs. Apollo running gag. The arms dealing gas station clerk also funny.
You have a comedic voice for writing.
Are you using final draft or what? Format was off. Waaaay off. With a lot of errors but I had patience to ignore it, most people wont and thats too bad because its a solid effort.
Also was this a 20-22 pg long script because it felt like it was reading long and would be way better if it was shorter.
I liked it though.
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), April 4th, 2011, 10:31am; Reply: 4
Not only is it riddled with strange typos, it's written absolutely horrendously.
I don't know how or why anyone would read the entire script.
Back to the drawing board...
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