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Posted by: Don, June 1st, 2012, 4:03pm
The Hobbyist by Andre M. Mahdi - Drama - A son tries to to build his dead father's dream. 102 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Forgive, June 5th, 2012, 6:08pm; Reply: 1
Melodramatic - introduction, to say the least - had the feeling that (visually) this wasn't too bad, but the writing -- well it was unusual - abundant use of tropes:
- the name Twist of Fate is designed into the side.
- as the small plane rushes across the sky, as it chases sunlight.
- The sizzle of the cockpit echoes inside the space.
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