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Posted by: Don, September 12th, 2012, 6:31am

Irony of Love by Muoneke Chidiebere - Comedy, Play - A Comedy play about a butler and a chief daughter - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: J.S., March 2nd, 2013, 5:56am; Reply: 1

Muoneke,

I'm sorry but I just didn't find this funny so I couldn't keep going with it. I just couldn't get into it. I think that in a comedy you have to throw the jokes at us one after the other, otherwise I think what you have here is a Dramedy.

-J.S.

Posted by: Pale Yellow, March 3rd, 2013, 6:25pm; Reply: 2

Hmmm have to agree it shouldn't really be in the comedy genre. You may want to read a few screenplays and get the formatting right. A lot of folks will stop reading at page one if it doesn't look like a screenplay. Keep working. Keep writing. And best of luck.
d

Posted by: irish eyes, March 3rd, 2013, 6:29pm; Reply: 3

I have to agree with feedbacks, it's not a comedy and it's also not proper format.

You might wanna try Trelby or Celtex to help you, they're free and look around at other scripts on the site.

Mark

Posted by: LC, March 3rd, 2013, 6:39pm; Reply: 4

I haven't looked at it... but Dena, Mark, are you aware this is a stage 'play', not a screenplay? Just sayin'.

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