Hit and Miss by Brandon Vega - Action, Adventure - Desperate to impress the girl of his dreams, an insecure loser becomes a hitman but shoots the wrong man on the first day of the job, jeopardizing his newfound relationship. 116 pages - pdf, format 8)

Quoted Text Desperate to impress the girl of his dreams, an insecure loser becomes a hitman .

I think this is basically the only information you need to tell for the logline, him shooting the wrong man seems kind of a spoiler to me.
Page 2  (Junior's dialogue)

Quoted Text Where are we going? Charlie hands him a single car key.

Page 12...

Quoted Text Junior takes the a swig of his beer.

I liked the opening scenes, Charlie is definitely a interesting character, I look forward to more scenes with him. The writing is very good also, the action flows nicely and the flashbacks fit in well. I've read to page 20 so far I will continue when I can.