Gilded by Karen Kelly - Drama - A journey in 1950s Tennessee about a naive Catholic Southern Belle who falls for an atheist, while trying to straddle sexuality and spirituality. 80 pages - pdf, format

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Karen: many grammatical and format errors need attention,

Quoted Text INT.MARRON FARM-MORNING

Spacing is wrong. Should be:

INT. MARRON FARM - MORNING

Quoted Text A GOLD CROSS lays against a white dress worn by a plump,white, southern belle VIRGINIA(17) sh she runs out of the house.The CONGREGATION of white southerners SING along

space needed between plump, and white.

sh - she = typo.

Space needed between house. and The

Quoted Text EXT.MARRON FARM-CONTINUOUS

Should be:

EXT. MARRON FARM - CONTINUOUS

Quoted Text The songs continues as Virginia runs into the family car.We

Space needed between car. and We

You have these errors throughout the script - a good scrubbing is in order.