Right From Wrong by Anthony Brooks - Thriller - A young teenaged boy is accused of a murder he didn't commit, following behind a group of friends he was trying to be like but gets arrested and thrown in prison. 101 pages - pdf, format

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Anthony - the first page is riddled with typos and punctuation errors  - you need to do a grammar check on this.

Grammerly is a free software download that might help.

Anthony,

Always good to copyright your work.

On page1, be consistent with your slug-lines, is it "BRICK HOUSE"  or "THE SMITH'S HOUSE"?

When moving around in the house, use mini slugs (KITCHEN, LIVING ROOM, BATHROOM, etc.).

Page1: Instead of "DeAndre, a young 19 year old teenager", why not "DeAndre (19)", less is more.

As Eldave1 pointed out, lots of punctuation issues (commas and periods).

Good luck
Frank