One Last Breath by Jack Allen - Short - One Last Breath is a brief scene with a son dealing with his mother's death, and the emptiness of going through the motions of a conventional funeral for her. 7 pages - pdf, format 8)

Hi Jack;

Sad, thoughtfull little short about something we all have to deal with at one time or another. I'm glad that Henry stuck to his convictions and had the funeral at the house, and I'm sure that meant alot to his Mom, too.  

Description blocks were a little wordy for a screenplay, but I don't think it detracted from the value of the story at all.

Won't forget this one.

Joe

Thank you for reading my story, and thank you for your insightful feedback.  I hope you will enjoy my next screenplay when I can get it posted.