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Posted by: Don, May 28th, 2009, 6:43pm
Murder at Madison Avenue by Thomas Radwell - Comedy, Thriller - As baffled police attempt to identify a body; 4 different witnesses finger 4 different suspects and 4 different victims. Slowly they piece this intricate jigsaw puzzle together and a tale of self sacrifice and refusal to be beaten emerges in an achingly funny yet nail bitingly tense 'who-done-it?'.  156 pages - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: Baltis. (Guest), May 29th, 2009, 3:10am; Reply: 1
If this were formatted properly -- PDF -- I'd have enjoyed it much more. Well, aside from all your director technical B.S. like "WE SEE" "WE HEAR" "WE ARE" and CLOSE ON and CLOSE THIS... Leave that stuff at the door. It's a waste of space.

Anyways, you're screenplay here is pretty damn new. If it were written better I'd have really dug in and loved it. It's one of the more original scripts I can remember reading. Good stuff, bad formatting.
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