If this were formatted properly -- PDF -- I'd have enjoyed it much more. Well, aside from all your director technical B.S. like "WE SEE" "WE HEAR" "WE ARE" and CLOSE ON and CLOSE THIS... Leave that stuff at the door. It's a waste of space.
Anyways, you're screenplay here is pretty damn new. If it were written better I'd have really dug in and loved it. It's one of the more original scripts I can remember reading. Good stuff, bad formatting.