Duplex by Brandon Schinzel - Short, Drama - For some, road rage can be considered a brief moment of uncontrolled insanity. A ride home will change a couples life forever. 21 pages - pdf, format 8)

Wierd short.
He waits behind a car in front of him watching undetected from a distance:  kinda awkward sentence, I’m sure there’s a better way to say this.
P7 why don’t you want kids.  Should have question mark.  Right after I don’t feel good about brining another person into this world.  Should be bringing.
P9 cheve is generally spelled chevy I believe.
Idoling would be different than idling, which is what u mean.

I think I'm missing the point of this.  It ends with the other truck just idling out front?  The story is just them bitching at eachother?  How does this change their lives forever?
Might make more sense if the driver ends up being their neighbor in the duplex or something.
This kinda reads like a real episode from someones life, in the way stuff happens, but it doesnt really add up to anything more.  What were you going for?