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Posted by: Don, July 3rd, 2011, 11:52pm

Will You Be Mine by Louise Lee Mei - Short - Coming to the aid of a stranger, Everline fights against her gift to save him. 8 pages - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: TheSecond, July 4th, 2011, 10:48am; Reply: 1

I have no clue what is happening here. Maybe that's my fault, but wtf is going on here?

Posted by: Loulou, July 6th, 2011, 11:48pm; Reply: 2

Apologies. Not a very clear draft. Will resubmit a better one soon!

Posted by: Kristian, August 18th, 2011, 10:00am; Reply: 3

Just wondering if you've worked on a rewrite yet? I liked the logline but the script was hard to read. I'd be interested in reading a newer version.

Posted by: skp1987, October 3rd, 2011, 5:18pm; Reply: 4

Yeah, it's well written in terms of descriptions and action, but the overall point of it is not that clear, which I don't mind. But If you're resubmitting it I'll hold of talking too much about it and will look for the newer version when you put it up.

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