The Outliers by William B. Secor - Drama, Coming of Age - A handicapped high school student who is a musical prodigy must make decisions regarding his future and relationships with family and friends, especially a young female singer he is mentoring. 125 pages - doc, format 8)

Hi William,

Your log line is incorrect. It reads more like a short synopsis.

I read through the first few pages but it's not in correct screenwriting format. Perhaps you should acquire Final Draft or something similar.

To be honest I stopped reading after the 2nd page because your opening paragraph kinda gives you away. Is this a shooting script? You mention background music but you do it in a conversational way.

The slugs and action lines were kinda all messed up.

Sorry.

-Gavin