Life by Samuel Theodros - Short, Drama - A fearful young man finally takes a chance. 9 pages - pdf, format 8)

I really liked the how Rob's pick-up attempt went and how he handled it, proving his point. It looked like it was heading fro a cliche then turned sharply and ended up being very entertaining and funny.

I really liked the theme and showing his future then going back to the present just before he spoke to Suzanne was really cool. Writing was slick and well-paced. The dialogue was funny.

Maybe it was a little too good, as I don't have any constructive criticism for you. But, there you go :) Keep it up!

Hey Andy -- welcome to the boards - I've seen you give some feedback on a couple of scripts - nice to see you reading some.

On the script: Your & you're gets confused here and there, and the story's not very well established early on. Not sure if Samuel pitches in at all.