One Last Time by Siva B - Short, Thriller, Suspense - A man is given a last opportunity to carry on one of the most difficult job he ever done.  6 pages - pdf, format 8)

Siva

All comments can be dismissed post haste.  Read as you wish.

I suspect English is not your first language.  There are multiple errors in the writing. I would suggest you find a writing partner who would correct the English.

Overall. The story doesn't work for me. Lots of camera direction and the semblance of action.

Best
Richard