SimplyScripts Discussion Board
Blog Home - Produced Movie Script Library - TV Scripts - Unproduced Scripts - Contact - Site Map
ScriptSearch
Welcome, Guest.
It is April 25th, 2024, 1:03am
Please login or register.
Was Portal Recent Posts Home Help Calendar Search Register Login
Please do read the guidelines that govern behavior on the discussion board. It will make for a much more pleasant experience for everyone. A word about SimplyScripts and Censorship


Produced Script Database (Updated!)

Short Script of the Day | Featured Script of the Month | Featured Short Scripts Available for Production
Submit Your Script

How do I get my film's link and banner here?
All screenplays on the simplyscripts.com and simplyscripts.net domain are copyrighted to their respective authors. All rights reserved. This screenplaymay not be used or reproduced for any purpose including educational purposes without the expressed written permission of the author.
Forum Login
Username: Create a new Account
Password:     Forgot Password

SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    Unproduced Screenplay Discussion    Short Scripts  ›  One Last Time Moderators: bert
Users Browsing Forum
No Members and 22 Guests

 Pages: 1
Recommend Print
  Author    One Last Time  (currently 758 views)
Don
Posted: March 1st, 2015, 10:20am Report to Moderator
Administrator
Administrator


So, what are you writing?

Location
Virginia
Posts
16431
Posts Per Day
1.94
One Last Time by Siva B - Short, Thriller, Suspense - A man is given a last opportunity to carry on one of the most difficult job he ever done.  6 pages - pdf, format


Visit SimplyScripts.com for what is new on the site.

-------------
You will miss 100% of the shots you don't take.
- Wayne Gretzky
Logged Offline
Site Private Message
RichardR
Posted: March 1st, 2015, 10:55am Report to Moderator
Been Around


Posts
889
Posts Per Day
0.26
Siva

All comments can be dismissed post haste.  Read as you wish.

I suspect English is not your first language.  There are multiple errors in the writing. I would suggest you find a writing partner who would correct the English.

Overall. The story doesn't work for me. Lots of camera direction and the semblance of action.

Best
Richard
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 1 - 1
 Pages: 1
Recommend Print

Locked Board Board Index    Short Scripts  [ previous | next ] Switch to:
Was Portal Recent Posts Home Help Calendar Search Register Login

Forum Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post polls
You may not post attachments
HTML is on
Blah Code is on
Smilies are on


Powered by E-Blah Platinum 9.71B © 2001-2006